Thursday, February 20, 2014

Descriptive Paragraph

I wasn't quite sure if it was okay to put on my blog, because some people have been telling me that there may be someone online that can plagiarize people's ideas. I just wanted to share a descriptive paragraph with this amazing thing I did for one writing class and this picture I drew in pain. I hope that you enjoy it.

I was skimming along on a rusty old-fashioned rowboat with two of my best buddies. We then encountered five multicolored babes reclining on huge boulders staring at us. Their long rainbow-colored hair, curled softly around their perfectly shaped shoulders. My two buddies panting like dogs, stared at the young ladies. As our tug drifted closer, the ladies glitched like a virus and bared their perfectly polished nails into terrible claws. I gasped when I discovered my buddies were entranced. I tried to calm my rapidly beating heart. We desperately paddled away from the sirens,  squeezing our eyes to avoid their terrible image.

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